Padlet and Mentor Sentences

In previous posts, I mentioned mentor sentences as a tool to help students write better sentences. Not only do they learn punctuation rules by studying sentences, they learn to write various types of sentences. Today I gave students two "mentor" sentences. We discussed the use of commas, appositives, and capitalization. Students then created their own sentences imitating the original author's style and structure. I asked them to post their favorite on a Padlet for all to enjoy!

Here are the mentor sentences I used:

Mom answered the door at 8:05 a.m. to Mr. Bridges, a short round man in a blue suit, and Coach Warner, who was wearing a Lake Windsor High pullover.

—Edward Bloor, Tangerine

I took the pearls out of my pocket, the three milky spheres the Nereid had given me in Santa Monica.

—Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief

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